Submitted by Heather on Thu, 09/18/2003 - 22:33
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Due to assorted technical difficulties (trees coincident in space-time with houses, short availability times and flickering power supplies) we have abandoned the Thursday night collaboration. I'll put here what we have so far, and we'll pick it up on Sunday night at 7pm (Monday morning 9am for Amanda). We should have better luck then...
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Collab rescheduled for Sunday 21st Sept at 7pm US EST
I have no power, and can only post this due to being on dial-up. Laptop is nearly dead as well.
Please, do not assume that I will be able to MAKE the sunday collab, or even be available soon. Heather can try calling me if she wants the whole story.
Collab rescheduled for Sunday 21st Sept at 7pm US EST
I've had a note from Amanda saying that she won't be able to make it her Monday morning due to various and sundry crises. Since it's already pretty close to 7pm we'll see how we go - Adam will have battery power for a couple of hours so if we don't fuck about getting started we should be able to get some done even without Amanda.
I'm e-mailing the fight in the cavern to everyone. I've spliced together the bits I have so far (which is everyone except Amanda), but there are a couple of spots which could benefit from an extra paragraph or two. I've put in notes in red capitals at those points. They're mostly towards the end of the fight. I've colour coded everyone's additions, so Alice is in pink, Darian is in blue and Nikolai is in grey.
Here and there I've added linking sentences to make it flow a little more, so if you see something you don't remember writing, that'll be why.
If there's anything you see that you'd like to change or add (especially you, John, since I added a little stuff for Alice right at the end, since she was the only character left standing in the cavern), please send me the additional material and where it should go in the doc.
Ta,
H.