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Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(vendettaexpress@hotmail.com) on Wednesday, July 23, 2003 at 15:13:26
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charname: Qwertyuiop
race: Demon
gender: Male
bdate: (2/2/1983) (Norway/Oslo)
group: Black Veins
position: Healthy
descript: Tall, blond hair, when lived in Denmark killed Humans for his vampire friends to keep them alive after battles. Loves the company of mortal hating vampires and loves to kick some mortal ass, while feasting on KFC.
history: Lived in Denmark for 20 years, moved to USA after his gang of vampires were killed by a powerful mortal but not as powerful as any slayer. Loves to eat KFC and to kick mortal ass.
items: Mortal Ass kickin' boots.
Necklace with a danish flag on it.
Irish Lucky charms.

powers: Call of the leprohchaun (recives a hint from irish friends)
Ultra-Mortal Ass Kicking Powers.
played_by: Lars Ulrich (Metallica Drummer)
player: None,13,None,huh?
age: over13
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MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(vampchik2003@yahoo.com) on Tuesday, July 19, 2005 at 01:01:01
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charname: Hayden
race: vampire
gender: female
bdate: 4/7/91 seattle,washigton
group: the black veins
descript: she was made a vampire when she was 14 she has dark brown hair, and icy blue eyes and is 5'4 inches tall, she listens to grunge rock music , like nirvana and bush
history: she was vampire in 2005 so she is new at this whole thing and is very pesimistic about everything. her dad commited suicede when she was 3 and she never knew her mom. She grew up in Seattle living under bridges and stuff and only had her guitar and her cd player and nirvana cds. she was sleeping under a bridge one night when she got sired.
items: electric guitar its a fender and is black adn white, cd player and nirvana cds:nevermind, in utero, and unplugged
powers: she can sense when things are going to happen and has visions
player: im 14 and i used to role play on some websites and i play guitar and am the lead singer of a band called My Bloody Romance
age: over13
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I think the idea of a guitar-totin' vampire with a bitchin' cd collection is an idea whose time has come.

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Allyana's picture

I like Lillith's axe too. Very Tolkienish. I want one for Alessa. :wink:

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MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(mrutjens@hotmail.com) on Saturday, July 23, 2005 at 13:29:42
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charname: Phoebe
race: human
gender: female
bdate: 2-17-1989 Holland-Eindhoven
group: The Coven of Sindell
position: Witch
descript: i got no idee
history: hehe
items: lol
powers: lol
played_by: no
player: Worlf of warcraft warcraft III + TFT Tibia
age: over13
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I almost didn't even post this one, but I get this sort of quality so rarely I had to share.

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Kaarin's picture

*blinks*

What possesses these people to do things like that?

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Hola-Meg-a-Cola's picture

*jaw drops*

This has to be a prank by one of the fellow Labn-ers. No person can be that dumb. I would prefer an elaborate form in l33t than that. Actually... no, I lied.

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MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(c_lawton2005@hotmail.com) on Friday, July 29, 2005 at 07:34:33
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charname: Bailey Fletcher
race: Human
gender: Male
bdate: 30/1/1973(Australia/Perth)
group: The Watchers Council
position: Hunter
descript: Bailey has no magical powers or mythic responsibility he gains his strength from years of hard training and hunting he was raised by his aunt (who was a watcher) when his parents were killed by vamps and when he was 20 he took a career as a traveling demon hunter he insn't a watcher who trains a slayer more of a field opperative. Bailey is middleweight has short blondy/brown hair and is as skilled a demon fighter as a sleyer.
history: Bailey was bor in perth in 1973 he had 1 older brother Malcolm (who also became a watcher) a younger sister Taran who was turned into a vampire and a baby brother Luke who died when vampires attacked his family killing his parents so Bailey,Malcolm and Taran moved in with there watcher aunt Wendy who trained them all but Bailey surpassed his siblings when he was in high school he took the role as town protecter saving Perth from countless vampires, Demons, Zombies and polititians when he was 20 he started travelling Australia as a demon hunter he would help families, Protect the innocent and destroy demons by the time he was 27 he had gotten to the australian Hellmouth (Port Macquirie) and ran into a group of heroes like him Tegan (a potentil slayer,Edward Sirk Watcher, Laura Scully scientist together they stoped the apocolyps 17 times but Bailey was a traveling hunter so he kept moving down the coast to a place called the Entrance (a darkmouth wich is a hellmouth only theres no hell underneath it it just draws bad things in) and decided to stay and build a company much like Angel Investigations So he Lyle Gorch a vamp with soul,Flynn Saunders demonoligist, Susie Rayner a scientist and Rhiannon Sanchez a Gypsy/Nymph stay to fight the good fight
items: 2 handguns, 1 small crossbow that has a strap to put around his back, Steke, Ankle knife,ankle knife made out of wood, Tazer, Collapsable arm sward that hooks up to your index finger so if you move your finger your sward comes out, Reactable arm steke strap to rude finger move finger steke comes out, grappleing hooks
powers: Bailey has no mgic powers or mythic duties but his stregnth is enourmas such of that of a sleyer he can take out 7 vampires with just a steke by himself.
played_by: Martin Dingal Wall
player: Minton Wexley im 16 have a part time job at coles and live in Darling Harbur
age: over13
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Spelling aside...I actually liked this one until I got to "his stregnth is enourmas such of that of a sleyer he can take out 7 vampires with just a steke by himself. " And then my brain switched off. The rest of it I could almost buy with some judicious editing it could be pretty good. I liked the Aussie background and the wWatchers' council stuff too.

Ah well. Maybe he will read this and re-submit.

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Heather's picture

lol I like the idea of Port Macquarie as a Hellmouth.

But Lyle Gorch is now a vampire with a soul? Huh?? Yeah, one or two things were just a bit TOO over the top. I felt a distinct air of Mary-Sue about this one, but I would be willing to read a fresh submission from this guy (though we might want to point him to a word processor with a spellchecker).

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Disposable_Hero's picture

I do like the basic premise of this char (ie, a kick ass watcher. In fact, I've got a half-finished profile for one of those lying around somewhere...) but like Heather is saying, a little too OTT in places (well, a lot)

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MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(jada_hughes2002@yahoo.com) on Monday, August 1, 2005 at 22:36:32
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charname: Jana the Head Witch
race: wITCH
gender: Female
bdate: June/11/1992 U.S.A.,Texas, Houston
group: The Coven Of Sindell
position: Head Witch
descript: Owns the wickens and they all bow down to her.
history: Tried to kill buffy a hundred times. one time i was almost sucessful.Killed the oldest Head witch to become the new one.
items: 1)Black Cloak-sexy kind but evil look to it
2)Black Bra-worn with cloak to go with the sexy look
3)Black Leather pants-to have an evil look
4)Black High heels-to suduce my enemies with
5)necklace-to hpnotize my enemies with
powers: 1)suduce
2)To stop Time
3)Guard Shield
4)Hpnotic Powers
played_by: Beyonce' Knowles
player: this is the only kinda roleplaying game i played.Im 13 i dont have job.I watch buffy the vampire slayer whenever i can.If i think i gonna miss an episode i ask my friend to record it for me
age: over13
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I think Kate and Daye will enjoy bowing down to this character. Do you think she perhaps meant Wicker?

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Meredith Bell's picture

Of course Dave! In fact as soon as I saw this submission with her powers to suduce and hpnotize I knew that Kate's days were numbered - THEN I got to the sexy black heels to suduce! OMG! I mean! How do any of us stand a chance!!?? :P

BTW -
Wicken = those witches made of wicker in order to disguise themselves to look like attractive baskets. :wink:

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MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(buffster223@sbcglobal.net) on Friday, August 5, 2005 at 19:26:34
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charname: Nikole
race: human
gender: female
bdate: 11/28/1986 /L.A
group: what?
position: slayer
descript: Nikole is 19, long dark brown hair, brown eyes, boy crazy, single, slayer, and her dad is in the army and does not believe shes a slayer.
history: Goes to colledge, part time, her dad is in the army and doesnt believe that shes a slayer, she saved her whole school from a mob of vampires and demons, killed a witch (a bad one) her mom died from a vampire when she was 15 and thats how she found out she was a slayer, right after the incedent, and ever since shes been determined to kill EVERY vampire on this plantet,also, her mother was indeed a witch, and she inheireted her mothers telekeneses, had two boyfriends in her whole life, and loves chicken!
items: stake: very sharp. she keeps it in her leather jacket or jeans
purse: she has holy water, an extra stake, and lip gloss
powers: shes a slayer, so she has great amounts of strenth, and a caring heart. plus she has telekeneces. from her mother that was a witch.
played_by: vanessa carlton
player: my names alexis, cal me lex, i have role played since i was 10, I LOVE BUFFY AND ANGEL! im in 7th grade, go to middle school, im 13 and i have a cat named nozzie!
age: over13
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This person emailled me to find out about when she could start. Let us see if we can help her make a better (read More Suitable) character for the game.

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Heather's picture

You know, I'm thinking of revamping (scuse the pun) the character submission page so that the basic rules are far more clear. In particular the rule about NO SLAYERS!!!

I think I'll put up a reference to Mary-Sueism while I'm at it...

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Meredith Bell's picture

Atch, I was wondering on the REGISTRATION form, whether we could make an e-mail address mandatory? (You know like the form won't be processed unless there's a valid email address?)

It's just something that irks me that we have people who register with the board and we don't have any way of getting in contact with them outside the forums - or even knowing if they've already submitted a character even.

I don't even know if we could do that, or if it would stop people registering and then never coming back again but it was just a thought.

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Heather's picture

I've also been wondering about the people who register and then never so much as say a word. I can't understand why someone would go to the trouble of registering in order to make posts, and then not make them. :? Still, I guess the kind of people who would do that are also the kind of people who would ignore welcoming e-mails if we sent them. I'm not sure making an e-mail address compulsory would make much difference, though I guess we could try it.

I can take the blame for one of our non-posting registrants, however. A friend of mine registered as leluka in order to access something I'd sent her the link to (it was in our Members' Lounge as it turned out). I doubt she'll ever make a post, even though she's a mad keen Buffy fan (some of you met her in Aust). :)

Anyway, I've added some bits to the application page instructions that will hopefully cut down on the Mary-Sues. Ooh, look, a pig just flew past my window...

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MrDave's picture

Actually, email IS required. ANd once they register it sends them a CONFIRMATION email. If they click that link they can then make posts.

If they ruin it right off the bat with a bad email then Pfft...they can't make posts.

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earwigfleshfactory's picture

Loullabelle wrote:
The applicant DID say they have a good sense of humour ;)

Yeah, but notice she didn't say anything about good medication. I'm thinking there's a pretty utilitarian answer for that.

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Meredith Bell's picture

MrDave wrote:
Actually, email IS required. ANd once they register it sends them a CONFIRMATION email. If they click that link they can then make posts.If they ruin it right off the bat with a bad email then Pfft...they can't make posts.

Ah, I was wondering because when I look up new member details it never displays an e-mail address (or much else to be honest except a user name). But then I guess you can choose not to have your e-mail displayed from the profile settings anyway.

Like I said I was just wondering cos I really hate it when people go to the trouble of registering and then we never hear anything from them. It seems like such a waste of time. :(

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MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(jadelrobo@aol.com) on Wednesday, March 8, 2006 at 14:31:02
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charname: balatica
race: jedi
gender: female
bdate: 9/21/1992
position: leader
descript: lone blond hair,tall (6,1)blue eyes
history: born in vancouver, canada
blue green eyes
1bro 2 sisters
items: lightsaber
powers: ability to use the 'force'
played_by: hayden christensen
player: jade
age: over13
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NOTE: Lightsaber?

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MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(super_grande@hotmail.com) on Monday, February 27, 2006 at 15:29:29
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charname: The Underdog
race: Vampire
gender: Male
bdate: 05/15/1928
descript: Strog and fast. His smart and very unpredictable. He can be blodsucking maniac or a smart tactic vampire, just waiting for the right way to make his move.
history: He was ones a very depresiv man, when he one day met a beutifull woman that sired him. Together they travled the world coloured they way blood red. But one day his travel friend was defedet and dusted. And I swor revenge...!

items: A svord and a axe. Dark outfit
powers: To kill quickly and smoothly whitout a trace. He is also god to play whit others mindes.
player: This is the first this kind of game I played
age: over13
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play god with other's minds? WTF?

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Kaarin's picture

MrDave wrote:
Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(jadelrobo@aol.com) on Wednesday, March 8, 2006 at 14:31:02
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charname: balatica
race: jedi
gender: female
bdate: 9/21/1992
position: leader
descript: lone blond hair,tall (6,1)blue eyes
history: born in vancouver, canada
blue green eyes
1bro 2 sisters
items: lightsaber
powers: ability to use the 'force'
played_by: hayden christensen
player: jade
age: over13
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NOTE: Lightsaber?

My question: why Hayden? Wouldn't Orlando Bloom be better suited to be a bloak playing a chick?

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MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(davey_is_great@hotmail.co.uk) on Saturday, March 18, 2006 at 07:05:52
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charname: FearThePain
race: Demon
gender: Male
bdate: July 26 1989 Coventry
group: The Order Of Valor
position: Head
descript: Big And muscley, 2 horns on his head, Wings on his back
history: He was born as a deamon and has the goal to overthrow the Earth so that man kind is no more
items: A long sowrd
A bow and Firey Arrows
powers: He can breath fire.
He can fly,
he had great Streanght
He can drain life
played_by: To Slughter
player: I am 16 I have played runescape and habbohotel I have worked at a paper shop
age: over13
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TwistedStranger's picture

With farangs like this, I'm reminded of my youth playing the good ol' games like D&D and Dark Tower. Nothing good ever ame out of MUDs 'cept for people with too much time and stupid things to do with it.

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MrDave's picture

charname: demon
race: human
gender: female
bdate: 22 may 1992
group: always the same
position: most powerful
descript: nice cool funny charmy hot cute brainy
history: the halliwell sisters
items: nothing
powers: charmed ones sisters powers
played_by: no
player: 14 newspaper delivering
age: over13
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Not even trying...

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