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Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(vendettaexpress@hotmail.com) on Wednesday, July 23, 2003 at 15:13:26
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charname: Qwertyuiop
race: Demon
gender: Male
bdate: (2/2/1983) (Norway/Oslo)
group: Black Veins
position: Healthy
descript: Tall, blond hair, when lived in Denmark killed Humans for his vampire friends to keep them alive after battles. Loves the company of mortal hating vampires and loves to kick some mortal ass, while feasting on KFC.
history: Lived in Denmark for 20 years, moved to USA after his gang of vampires were killed by a powerful mortal but not as powerful as any slayer. Loves to eat KFC and to kick mortal ass.
items: Mortal Ass kickin' boots.
Necklace with a danish flag on it.
Irish Lucky charms.

powers: Call of the leprohchaun (recives a hint from irish friends)
Ultra-Mortal Ass Kicking Powers.
played_by: Lars Ulrich (Metallica Drummer)
player: None,13,None,huh?
age: over13
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MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(floop007@Yahoo.com) on Tuesday, May 25, 2004 at 18:07:18
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charname: Darkstrike
race: demon
gender: male
bdate: 04/26/1991 Indiana us east chicago
group: special unit two
position: co-boss
descript: made of water,has glowing green eyes,see through
history: had a tough life killed so many demons i lost count.i was born in indiana east chicago at exactly 5:15 pm
items: no weapons
powers: can travel through water pipes or any place wheres there's water,can strecth my arms and drown the person from inside,can split into others,immortality
played_by: james marsters
player: i have played no other games im am 14.my job is to help the helpless
age: over13
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This one is a pair with the next one i think...

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MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(Daredevilangel20022000@Yahoo.com) on Tuesday, May 25, 2004 at 17:36:19
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charname: Gmb Cohen
race: vampire
gender: male
bdate: 11/04/1989 IN US IN
group: Special unit two
position: boss
descript: red hair,muscular,long,black leather jacket,red eyes,has help from friends,is the master of love,fearless
history: I am 251 years old, I am a good looking vampire that has a soul and I save the world.
items: carries a long black sword who takes the souls of others,carries a arm blade boomerang,carries a long silver spike,drives a black viper,arm stake,sword of light
powers: the powers i would choose are super strength,witchcraft,clone myself,great fighting skills,visions,vanish in a blink of an eye,
played_by: David Borenaz
player: I'm fourteen I help the helpless I have played no other games.
age: over13
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Meredith Bell's picture

8O 8O 8O

Okaaaaay. What's this thing with 'special unit two' anyway? :?

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Hola-Meg-a-Cola's picture

I personally thinks its either the same person over with different e-mails or a group of kids got together and was all "let's try to start our own group on here". But I did let out a little giggle at the "nice butt" part :roll:

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MrDave's picture

"Special Unit Two" was a short-lived television show. It featured a special police unit in Chicago outfitted with special weapons and some supernatural support.

It had werewolves, demons, and lots of supernatural creatures. And as a gag, there were no vampires. The leader of the unit used to laugh at people beliving in vampires saying "Who could beleive in such a silly thing!"

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MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(buffyfan090@yahoo.com) on Thursday, May 27, 2004 at 20:16:53
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charname: Raven
race: Vampire
gender: Female
bdate: 4/29/1980 USA/LA
group: The Cult Of Fascion
descript: Raven lives up to her name. With jet black hair & icy blue eyes she is considered a thing of beauty. And she uses such to her advantage.
Most of the time she's seen in a black tank & jeans, usualy draped in a trentch coat.
history: Raven was sired at the age of 22 & has been a Vampire for two years. At first she didn't accecpt it. She ran from it & resorted to starving herself, going a week without feeding. She struggled to find a way to co-exist with humans peacefully. Thats when she found The Cult of Fascion.
items: Raven uses the traditional vampire fangs. Period.
powers: Raven has the traditional vampire powers, including all vampire weaknesses.
player: I'm 13 years old, & I watch Buffy religously. I've never had a job obiously due to child labor laws. I often play either web RPG's or "The Sims".
age: over13
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Rates a 5 on the "Mary Sue" test. Borderline, but still nothing to recommend her as a player.

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MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(markusjohansson88@hotmail.com) on Friday, June 4, 2004 at 09:17:16
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charname: Predator
race: Human / Demon
gender: Male
bdate: 12/24/1984
descript: His hair colour is brown and his skin colour is withe. He usually wears normal clothes that helps him to blend in with his enviorment.
history: He was born in a small town called Räppe in Sweden.
Whe he was a teenager his biggest intrest was shooting and weapons knowledge. He read a lot about all kinds of weapons on the net.
When he was 18 years old he joined the army and started his 15 months long training.
He rose qickly in the ranks and became a fully trained soldier.

When he was 21, he got to know about the death of his father and his whole world fell into peces. He read in his fathers letter about the demons and about the curse that lies over his line...

During the 13th centuary one of his ansesters a renaouned demon hunter was possesed by a demon called Azsaroth.
Azsaroth started to posses the first born boy in every generation in that line.

At fist he thought that it was a joke but deep inside he knew that it was truth.
Then he realised his truth call, he was borned to continiue his ansesters work. He started to clean out the evil from this world.

After a few months he felt a srange feling of on be alone and suddanly he heared a cruel voice inside his head.
-I am Azsaroth the despoiler nee befor me and join me to bring chaos to your world...
I awserd the demon - I will not let you take over me! I will fight against you and your kind, I will wipe out all of your minion from the wolrd... That is my destany!
I felt the hell fire in my head, i could fell that I had agrivate him.

The demon had underesimated me, he had thought that I was week minded and easy to posses but with my military training I had a great pysical and mental stenght.
It was so the combat with me and the demon began. Meenwhile I started to slay the deomons minions.

I came to LA because I was huntewd by the law in Sweden, theay had get enought of unsolved murdered corpes and I was going to a bigger hunting ground.
The demon inside my head was not only a curse it was also a gift. It gave me untaural power.

items: Dual Sig saure pistols, 2 Combat knives, 2 Silencer for pistols, one stake.
powers: Night vision
More Agilerty than ordenary people
Stronger than normal people
More tougher than ordenary people
More accurated
played_by: Mikael Persbrant
player: My name is Markus and Im from Sweden. Im 15 years old and I have played meny different RPGs before.
age: over13
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Spelling issues aside, there didn't seem to be a lot to recommend this as a player. Sorry.

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MrDave's picture

This has to be a record for the shortest character submission, ever.

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(japlm9@aol.com) on Monday, June 7, 2004 at 01:57:45
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charname: samsonite
race: vampire
gender: male
bdate: 1978/01/14
descript: he is tall blue eyes black hair strong
history: he has many victims
items: black hair tall blue eyes
powers: he can do all things a vampire can
played_by: no
player: my job is im a nurse and im 26
age: over13
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Meredith Bell's picture

LOL! And Samsonite? So this vamp is named after a brand of suitcase? :wink:

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MrDave's picture

Loses points for mary-suism and writing style. I do give it props for being a little different from the other vamps...and she has been reading the board becasue she had the "brotherhood" and enhnaced angle. But it isn't enough to free it from the rejected stack.

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(KeKeCombs@Yahoo.com) on Tuesday, June 8, 2004 at 05:09:06
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charname: Adriana La Cerva
race: Vampire
gender: Female
bdate: 08/21/83 Italy/Venice
group: Loosely affiliated with The Brotherhood
descript: She has dark sexy brown hair with blonde streaks. She is 5'6 and very easy on the eye. She has a very curvy figure. She has dark subductive eyes. She has a tattoo of a moon with stars surrounding the left and right side of the moon on her lower back , which represents her transformation from human to vampire. She has an Italian accent.
history: She was born in , Venice,Italy and lived in a slum area. Her mother was a waitress who made $20 a week.Her father a mobster , who was never around. Her life as a child was very blurry. She really only remebers her father being the abusive husband and her mother being beating while she hide under her bed crying years off of her life.She didn't have the money to buy things needed for school and stopped going after 2nd grade. She started to get involed with drugs and gangsters.

When she was 19 or so she met a young man who's name was Tony.Tony was a man she met while working as a waitress along side her mother in the cafe'. He , like her father , was a mobter. They fell in love.They planned on moving out of the ghetto to a small normal town somewhere in America.Tony saved up the money from selling drugs and supprised Adriana with enough money to get a 'ride' to America.She and Tony took a boat to New York were they lived in a cheap rental appartment.

On their way to a club where Tony worked , they bumped into a drug deals that he owned money to. They shot Tony who died. Adriana ran of before they could catch her. She was so heart broken she called up a few friends who had connections and tracked down the dealers , herself , killed them both.In fear of her safety she move to Queens , NY. She had hopes to find a new lover, someone just like her. Italian , a vampire , and hopefully made a lot of money. Thats were she found out that it would be easier to start her own gang. She sold drugs which made her enough money to live in a cheap hotel. She made few phone calls to her family.

She called her mother one day to find that her father was dying of cancer. She packed up her bags and headed home. When she got there she spent every day next to her father's bedside. One day her father died. Her mother also died the following week of a heart attack. Another loss. She ran from the mem.'s of her parents to Queens ,NY. She moved back into the cheap hotel.

She was walked down the street one day when a vampire attacked her. This vampire was the man who had been stalking her every day.

The mans name was Drew. He worked for a vampire cult. He was the leader and wanted her to joing him. Be his lover. She wasn't interesting in him. She downed him and he left her all alone. Never seeing her , nor speaking to.

She stumbled upon her cousin Rosa Di Ricagnoli and has been livivng with her and learing what she needs to learn.
items: She always carries her gun and dagger which are usually found in her boots.( meaning a strap holds them on to her boot.) She wears a diamond necklace giving to her by Tony.
powers: Vampiric powers , increased.
played_by: Drea De Matteo
player: -
age: over13
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Meredith Bell's picture

Heh, well they might have read some of the gameboard but obviously not the rules since they've registered with the board already AND with the name Adriana, so they obviously never checked out the memberlist either :?

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Allyana's picture

Which is strange since she bothered to read some of the npc too. Rosa Di Ricagnole is my Roxana's real name.

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Hola-Meg-a-Cola's picture

It's basically the character Drea de Matteo plays on "The Sopranos" (hell, she even gave them the same name "Adriana La Cerva")

I saw this chick's name on the member list this morning and, litterally, I said aloud "Who's this person who stole my fucking name?" (a thanks to Lou who brought it up before)

Like Dave said, she was on the Mary-Sue side and the writing style seemed to be that of a 13 year old (although I don't know how a 13 year old would see "The Sopranos")

"Please try again. Do not collect $200 when passing go."

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Firefly's picture

I would also mention that she stole the name of one of my NPC's as well...hello, there's already a really important Drew on the board...

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earwigfleshfactory's picture

Adriana Lautari wrote:
although I don't know how a 13 year old would see "The Sopranos"

I'm not all that surprised at all. As a longtime fan of horror and explicit action (like Hong Kong, Tarantino, Rodriguez shit), I've gotten to where I'm surprised if I don't see at least a couple 13 year olds in the theatre. More often than not, they 13 year old is followed by a pair of much younger siblings/cousins/whatever. There is then public outcry about how movies of that type, and the games inspired by them, shouldn't be available because of the effect they have on the kids. Damn kids shouldn't see them in the first place, but the majority of parents out there are utter dolts.

==end rant==

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MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(crazycutie321@hotmail.com) on Sunday, June 27, 2004 at 01:59:38
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charname: Hope
race: Vampire
gender: Female
bdate: 2/28/85
group: The Cult of Fascion
position: Low
descript: Hope has straight hair down slightly past her shoulders that is brown underneath with a mixture of reddish and blonde highlights mixed in. Her eyes are hazel so they can be blue with the right shirt, but most of the time they are green. hope has plump lips which she usually covers with a ton of red gloss. She is 5'7, a curvy girl but still petite. Hope was a relatively tan girl before she was turned due to hours spent at the beach but is now pretty pale. She was very involved in kickboxing most of her life so her body is toned and fit. Her wardrobe consists of silk, velvet or cashmere tops over jeans. Hope is fashionable but know that she should be able to run fast if it's ever necesarry. She has a scar on her hand.
history: Hope was a fairly normal highschooler. She wasn't popular, but she did have a few friends (one of whom she ended up turning). Her father was a Watcher and was often out of town. His stiff attitude and strict rules left their relationship lacking. Her mother was a paliontoligist who never really wanted a child in the first place so Hope was often left with a nanny. As a teenager the occult fascinated her. With no strong religious background, Hope dabbled in the arts and developed a strong magickal background. As any spoiled child with daddy's money would, Hope often went out to clubs and danced. Music was hypnotic to her and she was attracted to bandmembers like an insect to a light. When she danced she was enticing and sexual. One night, a vampire spotted her on the dance floor. When she left the club, she was accosted by a no-name vamp. As a Watchers daughter, she should have stood some chance, but with the few drinks in her small system, she was a goner. In a final try to excape, Hope performed a spell which burned her sire to death and left a small scar on her hand. She awoke in the hospital (someone had taken her lifeless body there) and proceeded to kill everyone in her path. When she got out of the hospital she didn't know what to do. She had killed her sire and was utterly confused. For the first few months she stayed with a loser vampire who hadn't had a girl in years. In time, she gave up the loser and moved to an apartment with some money she had saved up. Although it was an amazing experience, Hope decided to stop killing. However, it is a rare night when she can't find a willing subject with her good looks.
items: She always has a cross. It doesn't burn her since she wasn't Christian and she believes it gives her an aura of innocence. She also has a book of shadows she has compiled of spells that have worked for her.
powers: spells, kickboxing, seduction, slight hypnosis
played_by: no
player: I am 16 and this is my first game. I watch Angel and Buffy obssessively.
age: over13
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Heather and I scored this as an 8 on the Mary-Sue test.

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MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(truslayer1@yahoo.com) on Friday, August 13, 2004 at 22:06:39
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charname: Selene
race: Slayer
gender: Female
bdate: 11-23-89 united states
descript: Selene has blue eyes and brown hair. She also has diferent shades of brown highlights in her hair. She is 5'6 and has light tanned skin. Selene often wears leather and "in style" clothes.
history: Selene was always a good kid. she fairly ever got into any trouble. She started using magic when she was about 11. her best friend Rachael got her interested in it. Then when Selene was 12 everything changed for her. Buffy had then died the seconed time saving Dawn, Selene was called. She has never ignored her calling but always questions what she's doing and why she's doing it. She was so scared of her powers that she ran away from home and was soon raised by her watcher Sarah Watson. Two years later her watcher was killed by a harbringer and Selene has been on her own ever since and has never loked back.
items: im sorry i don't understand what you mean by item's.
powers: Selene is a slayer and a powerful wicca.
played_by: Stephanie Coyle
player: I am 14 and i will be 15 in nov. i have done harry potter role playing and am still involved in it. I am in a high school that provides a professioal job one day out of the week from local businesses to help pay for the tuition. I am also a huge buffy and angel fan and have met some of the actors.
age: over13
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*BZZZZZT Thank you for playing. Have a year's supply of popcorn and our home game. next Contestant please!

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Hunter's picture

Oooooooooooookkkkkkkkkkkkkk. Well, firstly I don´t really see Slayers as a different race and she´s just also a powerful wicca as well?
Geee, why not make her a vengeance demon as well?

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MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(bigk1892000@yahoo.com) on Saturday, September 18, 2004 at 10:07:55
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charname: Darsla
race: Vampire
gender: female
bdate: 10/20/1899 Italy
position: trys to kill buffy and buffy is unable to kill her
descript: shes smart good at making plans can fool anybody even trys to be buffys friend
history: she was born in Italy in 1899 and when shee was 17 she was bit by her boyfriend who she thought was human and after that she has killed 5 slayers and has biten more than 1000 people and now is on her way to kill buffy
items: she has alot of different things to make her unique and is changing her ways all the time
powers: she is relly strong fighter and is very good at fooling people i would say you mess with her then you will regret it
player: i have never played role playing before
age: over13
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James_Connor's picture

is it just me or have you noticed taht eveyrone who gives a realy shit char bio used a yahoo e-mail address? :twisted:

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Firefly's picture

I'm just curious, when was the last time we got anything remotely resembling a genuine character proposal. It seems we're having a drought on good, original ideas. Is that alright? Are we at a capacity where we can do without any new players? Or should we think about recruiting now? As it's midseason, it seems to be the time to think about this. What do you all think?

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Meredith Bell's picture

I don't know about NEW players but personally I'd like to hear more from our EXISTING players that seem to have dropped off the radar. I'd say that probably half our members could fall into the 'inactive' catagory, which is a shame because we have lots of cool characters in existance it's just that we're not hearing anything from them :(

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Hunter's picture

I thinks it speaks for itself..... and it says crappiest idea ever (except for the numeral vamp/slayer/wiccas.).

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Simryn's picture

*blip* *blip* *blip*

As one of those players who falls into the 'inactive' catergory I am back on radar... and awww... I feel bad for some of these kids, it's so sad :roll:

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Hunter's picture

I guess, okay knows I can kinda be classed as inactive as well, but like I´ve said before I´ll make up for it big time now in mid-season (if I´m not for some strange reason forced to abandon this storyline, which I surely don´t hope.).

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MrDave's picture

I realized I have been not checking my admin@latenightgames.com email address becasue it was mis-configured. I fixed it an lo and behold! I have mail Lots of it. including these.

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(Anneliese_Devlin@yahoo.com) on Monday, November 1, 2004 at 17:39:12
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charname: Sierra Skulan
race: Slayer
gender: Female
bdate: 10/14/84
descript: She trys to be nice and kind to all things, and to people. She trys to show compassion to people and things in need but finds it hard to do.
Sierra has a very deep personality. Usually she's a very quiet, reserved young woman. But when ticked she has a temper as fiery as her hair is red. You have to really get to know her to find out who she is. When she's pissed off she has the tendency to swear til the cows come home.
history: Sierra has a very short history. Born in Alaska Sierra didn't have much experience with the slaying. Usually she was kept inside by her parent's for no good reason. she was an abused child at the time.
items: Stake, used to kill vampires. Crossbow, sword
powers: Slayer
played_by: Lindsey Lohan
player: ~Tracy Lee Olson~
Nicknames: Trazer, Streak
Age: 20
Gender: Female

Alignment (Good, Evil, Neutral): Good

Birthday: October 14, 1984

Nationality:Mutt

Religion: Christian

Personal Song: "In the secret"

Race:human

Zodiac: Libra

Career: sitting on my butt, LOL

Eye Color: Hazel

Hair Color: Red isn't the natural color. It's brown.

Height: 5'1"

Hangouts: anywhere the wind takes me

Personality: I'm usually a very quiet young woman.

Physical Description: I have shoulder length Redish hair and hazel eyes. I am short.

Piercings and Tattoos: 3 upper ear piercings
age: over13
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Rejected for 1: No slayers and 2: Didn't read the board...her age is off by 3 years.

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MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(ramcar1292@aol.com) on Tuesday, November 23, 2004 at 12:00:41
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charname: Kain
race: Vampire
gender: Male
bdate: 1969/april5th/CA los angeles
group: The Black Veins
position: Vampire
descript: Sharp teeth looks to be a 26 year old human.long blonde hair Black baggy pants with a black shirt and a black trench coat.
history: Kain was turned to a vampire one night when he was walking home on a late dark night from a party he used to slay vampires until they became his own kind now he slays humans.
items: Kain has Dual 9mm pistols a combat knife for a back up weapon.
powers: Kain has the power to be invisible and the power to jump long and high distances.
He can catch people on fire with his eyes
He has the power of telekenesis.
played_by: spike of buffy the vampire slayer
player: i enjoy playing xbox and skate boarding iam 14 years old
age: over13
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Four Strikes: Reused Name, Super vampire (powers over and above normal vampires), Non-existant group, and birthdate off by 3 years.

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Allyana's picture

Dave, what do you mean with 'off the age'? I thought the admitted age was 13 and over.

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Meredith Bell's picture

I think he's refering to how the character ages and birthdates are not concurrant with the current in-game date. If Sierra was born in 1984 then she would be 23 not 20 (at least that's what I assume Dave means).

Not that I really think that is a basis for rejecting a proposal, it's a relatively simple mistake to make basing a character's age on real time rather than our game time. Just like I don't think it's such a big problem if someone applies with an already used name - it can always be changed and I don't think that should count as a reason for rejecting an application either.

That's not to say that I'd accept either of the characters above, they're way too simple and show no origniality what-so-ever. But those would be my reasons for rejecting them, the dates and the name thing are annoying for sure, but easy mistakes to make.

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MrDave's picture

The main erason I rejected it for the age-math was it shows that the player didn't READ any part of the game board or the background material. That sort of mistake is generally a real giveaway.

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Allyana's picture

I thougth you meant their real ages, i got confused. :D

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MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(nikkidoll23@aol.com) on Monday, February 21, 2005 at 04:23:04
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charname: Ezzie
race: Vampire
gender: female
bdate: 04/25/83 USA/Post Falls
group: none
position: Leader
descript: tough blood sucking chick
history: 12/06/1912
items: sword, tommy gun, throwing stars
powers: imortal, posess people
played_by: jessica simpson
player: first time player really bored
age: over13
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Ozimandius wrote:
I just posted this becasue i thought it showed at least a little effort - but very little

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Hunter's picture

Well, the positve side is that she at least didn't write an overly Mary Sue-ish description and background to go with that character.....

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Meredith Bell's picture

You mean she didn't waste our time in making us read a terrible and cliche ridden history that we'd have only had to reject anyway? Okay, I see where you're comming from, but sometimes my only source of fun is heckling at these aps, oh where are my Mortal Ass Kicking Boots when I need them?!!!

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MrDave's picture

I have to say, the idea of a Jessica Simpson as a "tough blood sucking chick" has a certain ...um...male appeal

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Disposable_Hero's picture

Let her in.

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Blackthorn's picture

She wanted a tommy gun, seriously how often do you see that!

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MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(peace_lover777@hotmail.com) on Friday, March 25, 2005 at 12:47:24
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charname: Xangelus
race: Vampire
gender: Male
bdate: july 24, 1985
descript: Vampire with a soul
history: sired by william the bloody, almost destroyed the world, killed 4 slayers, got a soul by one of the slayer, never been heard of before since recieve soul, came to L.A. and help Angel out with the final battle.
items: Sword
leather jacket
scar on right eye
powers: vampire powers
have knowledge about history
love to fight
played_by: Bruce WIllis
player: i'm 19 year old, in Arkansas. college kid.
age: over13
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Xangelus - the grandson of Angelus who (coincidence? I think not!) happens to have a soul comes to LA to find Angelus to fight the final battle only to find out that Angelus will fit in an ashtray these days (thanks, Tash!) . Oh and he killed 4 slayers ...doubling his sire's apalling record of 2! Wow...what a guy. AND he's played by Bruce Willis. He must really die hard.

No.

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Logan's picture

btw, thats 4 slayers since 1985...when would that have been exactly?

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Kaarin's picture

AH, ah, Dave. It's not Tash who got Angel, remember?

It was Dr. Frederick van Helsing of the van Helsing Institute in Vienna, the greatest vampire expert in the world! :)

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Hunter's picture

Seeing that he's played by Bruce Willis makes me think of the hamster from "Retarded Animal Babies".

" You're my Die Hard 3." :D

Oh and I can see that he really has a huge amount of knowledge about history, considering that he was born in 1985.

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MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(kyleangus@hotmail.com) on Wednesday, May 4, 2005 at 15:36:34
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charname: kyle 98
race: human
gender: male
bdate: 3rd september1991 united kingdom luton
group: hunters
position: boss
descript: tall broud hansdsom
history: his perants died when he was young and now he fights evil
items: silver sword

powers: super stengh and agilty
played_by: sarah michell gella
player: im tall,handsom
age: over13
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Now this isn't even really trying. Male - Tall & Hansome played by "Sarah Michell Gella"?

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MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(mabel8223591@hotmail.com) on Thursday, May 5, 2005 at 18:12:54
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charname: Sarah
race: Vampire
gender: Female
bdate: 03/18/1991
descript: Brown hair, Blue eyes, evil yet still kind and sweet
history: In 1670 got turned has been a vamp. for 430 years has dated many but is now single and looking for a man who loves her and can support her, but won't hold her back.LOVES to kill. Knows the slayer and is friends with her.
items: axe, maybe sword, and a dagger
powers: to read minds
played_by: Sarah Michelle Gellar
player: ok aI played the buffy video game but i haven't really touched on the online rpgs i'm a student and 14 years old.
age: over13
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Better, but still Sarah Michelle Gellar isn't available. Why does she have to read minds? And if she can read minds, in over 400 years she can't find even ONE man who loves her? Talk about looking for love in all the wrong places...

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Meredith Bell's picture

I think that last one should be moved the the Oxymoron you Moron! Thread. She's evil but also nice and sweet? She's a vampire that loves to kill but is friends with the Vampire Slayer? Plus I'm guessing the birth date is the players not the character since being born in 1991 would hardly allow Sarah to be 430 years old... :evil:

Why am I even going into so much depth about this? :roll:

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Hunter's picture

*Sighs.* These people just never learns do they?

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MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(fieldingtrs@aol.com) on Monday, July 4, 2005 at 17:36:54
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charname: shernell
race: human
gender: female
bdate: 7/12/1990 LA,California
group: the supernatural hunter
position: hunter
descript: 5'7.dark long black hair.likes to wear leather.dark brown eyes.super strength
history: born in july 12,1990.her mothers name was susie.her dads name was jerome.her dad left when she was 8.she went to john e.howard elementary located in Los vegas.then exceeded to thomas stell high school.later she was then expelled by setting the school on fire.then her mom and herself relocated in Los Angeles.And night when shernell was walking down the street.a total stranger came up to her and told her that she and only her can help save people and hunt the supernatural.so the stranger tested her skills at a old abandon mansion that was a home for many supernatural and after 15 minutes she exceeded the lifetime job of hunting the supernatural.
items: sword,stake,cross,garlic,pepper spray
powers: super strengh-to lift things and to fight
and to be strong
played_by: beonce knowles
player: im 15,im in high school
age: over13
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MrDave wrote:
Failed because: Used a PC's actress (Parasol is played by Beyonce). Word useage (I think she meant 'succeded' not 'exceeded' - same mistake made twice). Derivative (sounds like Buffy's origin doesn't it?). Supernatural powers (Super strength) without any explaination for them.

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MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(AShley_Klefisch@yahoo.com) on Wednesday, July 6, 2005 at 13:36:51
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charname: Artemis
race: Vampire
gender: Female
bdate: 6/14/89 St. louis missouri
group: The black veins
position: Leader
descript: about 5'7 122lbs. Brown hair and blue eyes.
history: I was born in paris france in the year 1989. I was from a well to do family but I was the trouble maker the rebel. I never fully knew what my behivore had to do with my families dismise. I wondered from city to city, state to state, and country to country till I came to L.A. there I met someone who would change my life forever. it was the year 2000 when I was made I never knew his name or why he choose me, But I relized I had the greatest gift of all the gift of immortality. I am now still a fledgling but I am the leader of the gang the black veins.
items: A sword with a phonix on the handle.

powers: The power of ivisablity. The ablity to jump a four story building and the ablity to sooth the most savage beasts
played_by: Dakota fanning
player: I played final fantasy. I am 16 years old and a high school student
age: over13
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Rejected for : Dead Family, Changed at the age of 11, Magical powers with no explaination, The only plus I see is Dakota Fanning

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Heather's picture

That one obviously hasn't been keeping up with current events on the game board. 8)

Not to mention she's a fledgling vampire who has the power of invisibility, can leap tall buildings in a single bound AND calm fierce beasts. Riiiiiight.

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earwigfleshfactory's picture

No capitalisation.

Is it really that much of a chore to move your left pinky seven-sixteenths of an inch, ya tools? e.e. you ain't.

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MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(brittanyschaaf@93xrocks.com) on Thursday, July 14, 2005 at 01:01:39
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charname: Lillith
race: Human
gender: Female
bdate: 10/14/1989 Minnesota/Brainerd
group: ?
position: ?
descript: Smart, athletic, and a little bad.
history: Born and raised in a small Native American reservation in Minnesota then ran away from her boring life at age 14. When she moved to New York City she discovered a new world filled with ethereal creatures. In fear, she decides to hunt then kill all menevolent beings that she can without being killed herself.
items: Sharp axe from her mentor with the ability to shine a bright light when evil is close. Nearly unpenetratable outfit. A bow-and-arrow (family emblem)that hold protection for her from her ancestors.
powers: Athletic powers from her years as a gymnyast. Studied meticulously at one of the finest, yet unheard of, schools available; which gives her keen intelligence. Black-belt in Karate.
player: I haved played Fate, Adventure-Quest, and a few Vampire RPG's. I am 15 years old. I do not have a job, but am looking. In my spare time I run, write, paint, read, study and practice magic, study palmistry, work-out, do Karate, research, and am a part of the One-campaign.
age: over13
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How does a school get to be "the Finest" while still being "unheard of"?
I like the idea of an axe that shines in the face of evil. Cute.
I am putting this here and HOPING that Lillith will resubmit a more detailed proposal.

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