Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(sunny_catty@hotmail.com) on Wednesday, June 11, 2003 at 07:14:28
---------------------------------------------------------------------------
charname: Hate (this would be the nick)
race: ANDROID
gender: FEMALE
group: none yet
position: HERO
descript: Suggestions....
Height: 5 feet 7 inches
Weight: 40 ish
Demeanor: Her emmotions are not easliy given away from her expressions. She
walks straight as if very confident....all i can think of at the moment.
Attitude: Mostly cool, but she can get moody.
Lifestyle: -
Costume: No costume, regular clothes, but if looked closely you could make out
stainless steel armour on parts of her ody, like arms and leg, head. ut she does
a good job of covering them up.
Special Effects:(glows, surrounded by fire, etc.)None really.
Overall description: She has dark rown hair reaching to her shoulders, usually.
As she is an andriod, she she change her hairstyle y putting on different types
of wigs. She has broad shoulders and long thing fingers...not too long. She has
blue eyes and a small petite nose.
history: Hamilton Presly was a 44 year old man who had a lot of experience in
his work. His work was however "çlassified". HE worked for an huge underground
scientific reasearch and development facility, owned y a company named FUTURE,
where he was given the jo of managing security. However he was no ordinary
security guard, ut a very well trained in many forms of martial arts and the
knowlegde of different languages and also extensive training in many forms of
weaponry. He also had a lot of knowlegde of computer technology which was needed
for him to manage the security of the facility.
He however did not know wht he was protecting and knew not to ask too many
questions. So he carried out his jo, implementing etter security measures.
Sometimes he would e involved in small number of research operations, to create
etter measures of protection, ut nothing extensive.
He had a wife and two daughters, but he rarely ever saw them as he was mostly at
the scientific facility. One day he found out one of the employees had stolen
one of the very posinous viruses that were eing researched in the facility. That
scientist held it for ransom or else he would unleash the virus on the millions
of people and would kill them. It was also known that the facility did not pay
the ransom and the scientist released the chemical in the air. The scientist was
soon found and killed and the dangerous chemical was contained ut aout a hundred
people living near the facility lost their lives.
Note: as the facility was underground, right on top of it was a decent office
uilding to cover up the identity of the lab. The area around the la elonged to
the company as well and this area was home to thousand of the employees and the
families of those that worked there.
Hamilton later found out that his family was one of the humdred people to die.
The despair took him y surprise ut he knew there was nothing he could do. HE
decided to ury his sorrow into his work, so he start living underground too,
working there as many hours he could. One day he heard the rumor that the
''scientis'' that stole the virus was a hoax, and that this person was hired y
FUTURE to test the virus out on a numer of people to see its distructive power.
FUTURE had also lamed the creation of the chemical on the scientist, taking no
responsiilty for its creation and its destructive power.
Hamilton then fought out to get his vengence on the company. HE started to ask
for further work deeper into the company. It was 3years efore Hamilton was
trusted to be promoted from security management to scientific technological
research advisor. As he had experince and interest in computer technology, he
was trusted to work in a Nano technology research. He tried to gather as much
knowlegde he could. He was working at a robotic technology, which was supposed
to e a highly advanced andriod. After the ody was uild of this android, and
tested to ensure exelent movement aility, it was then the stage to put the
""rain"" into the andriod.
Hamilton worked on created this brain, which would e capale of very high
artificial intelligence and think for herself. Hamilton also found out that this
android was actually supposed to e a H.A.T.E prototye, Highly Advanced
Terminating Electrum, electrum was the computer technology eing worked on.
Hamilton was supposed to create an assinating machine that had no guilty
conscience and a perfect killing machine.
Hamilton started to then fill the robot with his memory and sort of him own
thinking, which meant that when opperationaly this android would have a
consience. He did this is secrecy, not daring to tell FUTURE what he was doing,
and all the time they thought he was following them. Hamilton was filling the
android with his own memory and also filling the root with information aout the
FUTURE that was highly classified so that if he was found out and eliminated,
the andriod could carry out his jo.
His fear was true and one day he was found out and killed, right before he could
deliever some presious evidence to the press. FUTURE then put its advanced
sceintists to test the android, trying to make sure Hamilton hadn't tried to
fill the root with his own mission. ecause of hamiltons high skill, he had
programmed the android in such a way, that his own memories would only come out
only after six months of exact android operation. So when Hate was started and
tested, she had no recollection of Hamilton. Thinking that Hamilton had failed
to implement his thining on the android, the andriod was sold far away to the
secret services. There she spent two months in further training. After that she
was used to carry out assainating missions.
On the sixth month of her operation, she was in Peru to kill a man who was
allegedly a spy. Right on the exact time her operation exceeded six months,
hamiltons thinking and memory came into place. Hate had a momentary memory
problem and then started to rememer all she had to do. She also had retained
hamiltons training and also her own army training and knowlegde.
She dropped her weapon, much confused. She knew what she had to do. The expoture
and destruction of FUTURE.
enemy: No specific villian ut the FUTURE cooperation.
The company is a huge technologically advance company that provides goods such
as computer technology to security to even household chemical technonly such as
household detergents. It also provides most of the medicines seen in the
phamacy. It is a mutimillion dollar cooperation.
However it also carries out secret weapon and computer technology and also
chemical research that is illegal. It sells these too not only the government ut
to other cooperations and governments around the world.
powers: Hate has great amount of strength due to the fact she is a anroid. She
maye strong enough to take over five strong men at most. And due to her training
and memory retention from hamilton, she also had a lot of knowlegde of martial
arts and can speak a wide variety.
She can also jump or leap aout 7 feet into the air, and this is ecause of the
special computerised springs that have een put in her heels and knees.
She also has sheild aility that can easily stop bullets ut a harder to stop more
powerful weapons. Her sheild is powerful ut not too powerful meaning that even
though she can e protected from bullets, ut too long in the shower of ullets and
her sheild will start to lose power. She can activiate her sheild on will.
items: she doesn't carry any particular item ut always keeps a weapon, usually
two eagle pistols, with her, and also a strong knife.
played_by: really not sure of. I would like some ideas...if any...
player: umm, love playing rpg, my names Saadia and i have played on labn. My
interests are mostly in computer games, reading, doing needle work.
- Login to post comments
Post to Twitter
Hate
Hello guys.....
just wanted to say that can you tell me whether this character is any good or not. I am not a really comic fan, yes i read archies but i haven't read any superhero comic stuff, just seen some old superman movies with Christopher Reeves...
I mean can you critically assess it and tell me if i need to change anything, as i did no research at all for it, and i'm sure i didn't put much detail into it and left forgot to include some stuff like "location" and all....sorry....
Hate
Saadia, its not bad actually. The bumper sticker version:
Fatherly scientist dies creating an android which is later corrupted by Military interests. It escapes and lives the life of a fugitive trying to relearn what it was created to do.
There is a lot of story potential there. Superherpo comics aren't much different than a kind of contemporary fantasy. and it would seem you've captured the genre perfectly.
I say gofor it.
Hate
thanks Dave, so if its okay with everyone else i'll register....
Hate
sure Saadia, go ahead