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Character Proposal: Fayina (rejected)

MrDave's picture
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Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(dawn_littlebit@hotmail.com) on Wednesday, July 9, 2003 at 12:46:48
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charname: Fayina
race: Vampire
gender: female
bdate: March 12,1984
position: Master Vampire
descript: Red hair,blond highlights,bright green not normal eyes,5'2,slim but has strange build,asain face,
history: She was born in the china durning the a age when a woman was to be a house wife. However her father a master of sword fighting. Broke that rule and she became a sword fighter. She won many camptionships. Wearing a mask and calling her self mizu meaning water. She was well knowen in rummers. no one know she was a woman. She fought a enemy whouwas unlike and other to protect her family. He killed her turning her in to a vampire. She how ever had one side effect her soul remained. But she learened that she must not be weak. SO she fought and lived leaving her sir as soon as she could. She became well knowen to the wacthers as the water vampire. In her live time she was a wika and kept her knowlge of the darkarts. This is how she lived and became a master vampire now over 200 years old. She fights to protect the pepole who would be killed by her kind she lives in New York.
items: sword ancent weapon. made with folds of space astrode. She castes water spells using it and has a spirt that is her copmpaiton. A water goddess in a jaguers body. Only can be seen by her unless they are in battle. Animal can talk and think like a human. She was cursed by an evil man and made into a spirt to have to serve who ever has the sword. It is a sameri sword on arm long.
powers: magic user of the water elment. She cast spells using water. She can also use spells to make it dark or light and otehr elments only. Her compation is a elmentalest to and uses old magic. She can fight well with a sword and win against almost any one.
player: I am 18, in highschool. I have played D&D and magic and injoy RP games. this one sounds really cool.
age: over13
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Character Proposal: Fayina (rejected)

Heather's picture

Oh, man, this one just screams 'Mary-Sue'. Vampire with a soul, AND a powerful Wicca, AND a master swordsman? Right. And of course, the obligatory weird eye colour.

*sigh*

Character Proposal: Fayina (rejected)

Logan's picture

Alas, as much as i hate to do this, I say no hehe

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